Zephyr (Needs Review)

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Name: Zephyr

Age:1,300 years old (Neither the oldest or youngest of her siblings)

Gender: Female

Eye Color: Green

Hair: long and blonde

Skin Color: White

Height: 5'8''

Parentage:She forged by the demon blacksmith Dæmiøn (dead) and given her powers by the black Witch Desminda

Species: Demon Sword

Physical Description:
Human- She is tall and willowy, very beautiful
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A fey sword Rapier is the style. The blade is a mixture or silver, steel, and Iron.
Personality: She is a very distant being, but incredibly smart. Quick to anger but slow to forgive.

Realm of Origin: A Dark Realm called Caligo
Talents: Singing and playing the Lyre And zampura

Weapon*: Her ability to use wind and a small steel dagger at her waist.

Flaws**: Her will can be taken away by using a specific spell so she can be bound to one single person, she is strong headed, and puts things bluntly no matter the people's feelings

Powers: Battle Wind manipulation, She can use it for a three hours strait but if she runs out of wind time she reverts to her original sword form.Other than that she is very strong in wind manipulation and can do just about what ever she wants with it without becoming exhausted. She and any demon sword can double the power of the wielder.

Backstory***: Forged in the fires of the darkest volcano in the realm of Caligo on an island named Demons of lost Souls. The island was an off shoot of the realm Caligo that sank around the forging of the orb. Zephyr is the third of five Demon swords forged at this place. Zephyr is one of two swords that fight for the good of the Realms. She has had hundreds of wielders. But, has never really connected with any of them except for an hand full, Hanna included. Zephyr and Hanna met in the armory. This was the place were Zephyr slept for one hundred years. Mending damage from the last great war. Zephyr's siblings are missing and waiting to be re-awoken

How does your character feel about being a monster? Regrets or is the life satisfying?***: Technically I'm a sword. Not a monster, unless you want to go all ninja nerd vampire on me. Then, go ahead label me as a demon sword. Life has certainly been entertaining. Oh, your wondering about my stories of adventures. There was this time were there was this Warlock lost his bet. He had to parade around town in a dress. There was another time I met this King. He was so strange, probably had a touch of brain fever. Any who, he kept going on and on about migrating coconuts and saying, "your mother is a hamster." He seemed so sure about it too.

Roleplay Example: The forest was dark. But loud to my demonic ears. I could hear big animals hunting and even bigger animals hunting them. Hanna rolled over next to me mumbling something about "fairy spiders" in her sleep.
A twig snapped under a thick soled boot. I pushed myself to my feet looking into the forest. Then I saw him, he was a massive man who smelled of unwashed flesh. I ran at him, jumped into the air, and brought my fists down on his head. Crushing the skull instantly. The man crumpled like paper. In the morning Hanna didn't say anything about the dead body in the tree.

Notes: Demon sword of wind and Wielded by Hanna Wilde
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Demon Sword info:
Demon swords are swords imbued with demon powers. Such as to change from a sword into an humanoid. All swords have an element such as fire, or lightning, or wind to manipulate in battle or in their humanoid form. Carnage trails a Demon Sword all through out life and they often bring bad luck to their wielders. A Chant is said to change From Humanoid to Sword or the other way around "Shake off your slumber. Seize upon the truth. Take the (*name of element here) in hand and awaken"
Example: "Shake off your slumber. Seize upon the truth. Take the Wind in hand and awaken"
They are also able to sense other demon swords and demons.
Anyone can wield a Demon sword as long as they both agree, Swords are not bound to their wielders and they can leave at any time. They can remain in any one form at one one time. Swords can only control one element . They can transform anytime at their will. A sword fights for whom ever they choose. If you want to wield one don't hold your breath it is a chance meeting. As in you meet one and they usually walk away without telling any one their secret. In order to become a wielder you have to gain their trust. Then they may offer you the chance to become a wielder. It is a mutual agreement based on power. There are only five of these creatures in the five realms, One per realm. None of them have the same element.
Demon swords can be killed in their human form by a Mortal Sword. That is soaked in Nightshade after its been crafted with platinum.
The spell for binding can only be found by slaying a demon Sword and binding them with their last breath by saying, "Demons of young and old be welcomed into my fold. Bow before me."
The wielder is in control, this does not kill the sword because their soul is tied to their wielders soul. The only way out is for the death of the wielder and the sword absorbing their life force.

i'm going to have to ask you to wait on Klair...I honestly think that Wolfie and I would have to both agree and sort this bit out...i like your idea, but currently, without actually having a realm called Vienskarde or anything even close to the idea you propose here, i must ask you to hold off using Klair as a charrie.

Thanks for understanding.

-The Bluejay

No problem. She gets back Tuesday right?

I believe that you are correct.

Thank you for your understanding.

-The Bluejay

Since the realm that you mentioned she is from does not exist, perhaps you might want to make her from Caligo since that is where The Shadow is established. It's the darkest of the realms and I think that it would suit your purposes.
Do you think that you can elaborate on what a Demon Sword is? While I am an avid fantasy reader, writer, and researcher, I have not yet stumbled across such a creature. Would you mind going into more detail and perhaps we can work something out for her? Is she a sword that can shape-shift into a humanoid form? Please explain.
One of her flaws says that she is unable to see the way that other people do. Do you mean literally as in visually impaired, or do you mean that she can't think the same way as others would be able to?

What are your exact questions on these creatures. I will answer them to the best of my ability.

Please read the sentences that end with question marks to answer your question.

Kay I think I answered every thing in your post in the form

How is her thought-process different from that of other people?
Who can wield a Demon Sword? Are Demon Swords bound to serve the wielder? How long can they remain in humanoid form before having to become a sword? Does Kair have a master that she is bound to serve as a sword? Can she embody all the elements or just one? Does she need to be commanded to become humanoid in order to transform, or can she do it on her own? Can she only fight for the wielder, or can she escape service?

Got all that put up.

How does on come to wield a sword?

Kay, added that...

Can Demon Swords be killed in their humanoid forms, if at all? What is the spell that can bind her to a single person? Describe the relationship between Swords and their wielders. {A mutual agreement, a bond of trust, friendship, respect, etcetera. Be specific.}

Kay. Added.

Wolf Knight wrote:

Demon swords can be killed in their human form if the blade is soaked in Nightshade and crafted with platinum.

Okay, hold up here. So is she sword and human at the same time? Or are you trying to say that if someone ties her up and soaks her in a potion of Nightshade and platinum, she'll die?

Woops... forgot about context.
This is a diffrent sword that is forged with platinum and soaked in night shade. The term is mortal sword. It has no spasific power other than it can slay demon swords.

I am going to sound like a real jerk here, and I know it too. I should have just said this from the start and not tried to find a way to make this work... But I'm really uncertain about this and you DO know that you're creating an entirely new species, right? I'm sorry, but I just see too many ways for this to go amiss and I'm going to have to say that this character just won't work out. I know you've worked really hard on this character and I'm really sorry, but I think that we're just going to have to scrap it. If we let you create a new creature, then everyone else will want to invent something. For the time being, we just can't afford to let that happen. I'm sorry.

Its okay.

Thank you for your understanding. Please believe me that this has been a very difficult decision.

If you could delete this topic that would be great. Now, what if I said pretty please about the dragon. Cause there is one like aria running around.

Oh bunny it all, who is it?

Now I feel like a tattle. I belive the term you are looking for is dash it all. I'm not sure but he his an accepted charrie.

Well, I just need to know who it is because shape-shifting dragons are going to drive me crazy if I accidentally approve{d} one. O.O
Want to talk in the c-box?

Can't my table doesn't have the right software.
The charrie is ness99 's named nirva.
Please don't eat bluejay he's very fun to rp. With.

The things that happen while I'm out of town. xD
Okay, I'm going to keep this topic because I like the idea, but don't just think we're ready for something like this yet. I'll try to figure out how we might be able to work in Demon Swords, but for now the topic is closed. I'm going to lock it until further notice/until I think something up. Thank you for your contribution.